Poetry Friday: Updating

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Upscaling, Upcycling, Updating … they all carry the connotation of getting better or more use or moving forward for me.

Hold that thought, I’ll return to it soon.

This week has been an odd one. Last Saturday night, my husband took off to drive to the Twin Cities, about three hours away from us.

Our youngest son, a successful artist, had a commission for a large commemorative painting that needed to be delivered to Florida by January 6th. It was for the Tampa Bay Lightning, an NHL Hockey team. The problem was that the 72-inch-long painting had not dried enough to be able to ship it.

So, as we are retired, my husband offered to drive the artwork to Tampa with our son to deliver it. They left last Sunday morning, in a rental van (it would not fit in our vehicles), for Florida. The drive was long – over 2,000 miles in two days.

It all worked out. My son was in touch with his contacts and arrived the day before the painting was needed for a special presentation. They were blessed with good weather and enjoyed being present to see the person for whom the painting was done receive it.

The next day, they headed home and got back to the Twin Cities last night. My husband is on his way to our home now. Whew!

This left me at home with our pets. It’s been a strange week. Ice has coated everything in sight, and it’s been hard to walk without fear of falling, but we did it. I’ll be glad that things will be returning to normal today.

Thus, I have not had a lot of time to think about writing poetry. But, I was able to read from one of the two books our eldest son gave me for Christmas – books I had asked for.

Two of AA Milne’s books that I asked to receive as Christmas presents. Photo by Carol Labuzzetta, 2026.

I had specific reasons for requesting these books and knew that my bibliophile son would grant my request.

The poem I’d like to share is from When We Were Very Young (1924). It is in the public domain.

Daffodowndilly

She wore her yellow sun-bonnet,
She wore her greenest gown;
She turned to the south wind
And curtsied up and down.
She turned to the sunlight
And shook her yellow head,
And whispered to her neighbour:
"Winter is dead."

© A.A. Milne, 1924.

You can read more of Milne’s poetry here. His books When We Were Very Young and Now We Are Six are in the public domain.

I like this poem because it is centered on nature rather than on Milne’s characters from his Winnie-the-Pooh stories, although I love those too.

With all the ice, snow, and subzero temperatures we’ve had this year, I am looking forward to our annual escape to the USVI’s, coming up in a few short weeks.

I might not see daffodils there, but I will see hibiscus and other tropical plants, and for a short time, can declare that “Winter is dead.”

Daffodils in our Wisconsin yard 2021. © Carol Labuzzetta.

Ruth, from her blog “There is No Such Place as a God-Forsaken Town,” has the roundup today. Thanks for hosting, Ruth!

Back to the Update/Upscale/Upcycle/Upgrade…

As an afternote, I have not done much more work on revising (or updating/upscaling) my blog this week. I ask for your patience in doing so. Thank you!

5 responses to “Poetry Friday: Updating”

  1. Tracey Kiff-Judson Avatar
    Tracey Kiff-Judson

    Carol, what an adventure for your son and husband. So thankful that they made it on time and without incident.

    I haven’t read much Milne, outside of Christopher Robin and Pooh, but I am heading to the library today and will look for a copy of his other work. “Daffodowndilly” is such a child-like, fun word!

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  2. cathystenquist Avatar
    cathystenquist

    What a special adventure for your husband and son! Congratulations on his commission. I am sure they had some wonderful conversation on the way down. The title of that poem is awesome. I just checked out a book called, “The Dictionary of Lost Words” by Pip Williams. “Daffodowndilly” sure sounds like it could be included there! I didn’t know A.A. Milne had written those books. I will check them out. Thanks for sharing.

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  3. rosecappelli Avatar
    rosecappelli

    Love that word – Daffodowndilly. Thanks for sharing it, Carol. It might just inspire others! Glad your husband and son had a successful journey. The painting sounds very unique!

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  4. lindabaie Avatar
    lindabaie

    I’m happy that the big delivery all worked out, Carol. What a journey they had! Congratulations to your son for such a special commission! As for Milne, I have the books, & they come in & go out often at the bookstore. I almost shared a favorite Milne poem today, one that feels right for our year’s beginnings, for a graduate moving to the next steps, & on. Look for “Spring Morning”, & this is verse 1 –

    (Where am I going? I don’t quite know.
    Down to the stream where the king-cups grow-
    Up on the hill where the pine-trees blow-
    Anywhere, anywhere. I don’t know.)

    I love Daffy-Down Dilly, where more of Milne’s marvelous rhythm comes through! One can just imagine little ones standing up & reciting it!

    Happy Travels on the vacation!

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  5. Jane the Raincity Librarian Avatar
    Jane the Raincity Librarian

    Your husband sounds a lot like my dad, he would’ve done absolutely anything for me, and he was definitely a last-minute chauffeur and delivery driver on more than one occasion!

    Milne is such a treasure, I return to his poetry again and again. ♥️

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