Poetry Friday: Mournful Mood

A mournful mood hovers over me this morning

like a dense fog, thick and oppressive. Thoughts

of what could have been,

what should have been,

what might have been,

replace all others.

Laugher in the hallways,

a carefree smiling face, life’s race run at full speed,

full of joy and well-being.

The fog of mournfulness is heavy, weighing

everything down in its path.

Even the twinkling lights of the newly fir lined

banister cannot banish the grayness of my

mood.

To nature I look, noting a tinge of blue beyond the gray.

It is there. Can you see it? Hope. Seeping

through the gray to permeate our lives

once again. It is always there behind the fog.

Hope.

Joy.

Life.

Living.

 

This poem is being submitted to the Poetry Friday community hosted this week by Elizabeth Steinglass. She offers a wonderful piece on a Menorah. Please check it out!

3 responses to “Poetry Friday: Mournful Mood”

  1. peggyricewi Avatar

    So glad you can see the blue beyond the gray. The sun beyond the clouds. I understand.

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    1. theapplesinmyorchard Avatar

      Thanks, Peg. This poem really does reflect my mood today but the cause of the mood is not personal. Does that make sense? Sometimes you see loss that others might be experiencing and it causes one to grieve for them. Thanks for the comment.

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      1. peggyricewi Avatar

        It’s hard to see friends hurting anytime, but especially at this time of year!

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An Anthology of Ekphrastic Nature Poetry with twenty-five authors from four countries. Featuring the poets’ color photography and a variety of poem types. Written for middle-grade students, their teachers, and homeschooled students. Published in 2024 by Northern Loon Press.
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