Poetry Friday: How a Cedar Wears Snow

This is the second in a series of poems I’m writing on how trees wear snow in the winter.

A snowy path in the woods with low-hanging boughs after the recent snow. © Carol Labuzzetta, 2022.
Cedar boughs covered in snow outline the tiniest of scales. © Carol Labuzzetta, 2023.
How a Cedar Wears Snow

My branches called boughs
Are bending low, in a frown

Snow came, fast, wet, and heavy
Making my boughs bow down 

Leaning over, I look sad 
Under the weight of the snow

My scales are another type of 
Coniferous difference, don’t you know?

Catching the frozen precipitation
On my tiniest scale

Outlining my bough to the very tip
Leaving human artwork to pale.

It is the winter when I,
A Great Cedar can bend 

And not break.
Still standing guard to lend

The Northern Forest, I call home,
To look like a child’s snow dome.

© Draft, Carol Labuzzetta, 2023
Second in a Series of Poems on How Trees Wear Snow
Carol lives in the Upper Midwest and is a published American Writer.
Bent over cedars are plentiful in the forest after snow. © Carol Labuzzettqa, 2023.
Our road today as it looks after the recent snow. © Carol Labuzzetta, 2023.

Today is Poetry Friday. Catherine Flynn is this week’s host for the round-up at her blog, Reading to the Core. Be sure to visit for inspiring poetry on change and links to other poets! Thanks for hosting, Catherine.

14 responses to “Poetry Friday: How a Cedar Wears Snow”

  1. Linda Mitchell Avatar
    Linda Mitchell

    What a neat series. Love all the long “o” sounds…it adds to the heavy, sad feeling.

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    1. theapplesinmyorchard Avatar

      Thank you Linda. I’m going to pitch it to some publishers. I love the nature connection with observation.

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  2. maryleehahn Avatar
    maryleehahn

    Gorgeous snow, gorgeous poem!

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  3. Marcie Flinchum Atkins Avatar

    I really, really love thinking about how trees “wear” snow. It’s open to so, so many possibilities.

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    1. theapplesinmyorchard Avatar

      Thank you Marcie! I agree. I am in the process of writing a pitch to some book publishers for this poem series.

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  4. Kay Mcgriff Avatar
    Kay Mcgriff

    Beautiful snow pictures and poems!

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  5. cvarsalona Avatar

    Carol, your photos look like a dreamland for trees. I love looking at snow falling down in forests. It is so peaceful a setting. Trees know how to bend and bough during winter time as you helped us understand what it looks like in the upper midwest.

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    1. theapplesinmyorchard Avatar

      Thank you, Carol. I am really enjoying being immersed in a forest setting now. I am glad you liked the post! I hope you are well!

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  6. lindabaie Avatar
    lindabaie

    “a child’s snow dome” among other lines are beautiful, Carol. I’ve taken a lot of pics, too, of the evergreens in my garden & neighborhood with snow. I love all your pics but my favorite is that 2nd one, an intriguing art pattern. Happy New Year! Wishing you more cedars and snow ahead!

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    1. theapplesinmyorchard Avatar

      Linda, Thanks so much! I am glad you liked the post. Today’s features more trees with snow. It great that you are a fellow garden appreciator!

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  7. heidimordhorst Avatar

    I like the two ways you used “scale.” It’s obvious and yet I hadn’t ever considered that different trees wear the snow differently. Lovely.

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    1. theapplesinmyorchard Avatar

      Thanks, Heidi! LOL. I didn’t even realize I did that until you mentioned it. My thinking was much more concrete!

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An Anthology of Ekphrastic Nature Poetry with twenty-five authors from four countries. Featuring the poets’ color photography and a variety of poem types. Written for middle-grade students, their teachers, and homeschooled students. Published in 2024 by Northern Loon Press.
My chapbook of poetry (2022) is available on Amazon.