Poetry Friday: Debris (A Found Object Poem)

Cabin in the woods, Circa 1865. © Carol Labuzzetta, 2019.

Debris

Peonies, a doorknob, a pump

Found amongst the debris

These remnants tell of your life here,

Alone, in the woods, a simple way to be.

We saw the added-on rooms, and

A kitchen that burned.

Did your husband die or

Were you spurned?

Years you lived here,

Centuries ago, on this land.

In this cabin, in these woods,

So near the river, but without any sand.

Was any of the forest planted by you?

The hickory, the birch, or the willow?

When the sun went down, did your

Head hit the pillow?

Did you eat off the land?

Fiddleheads & fungi could have fed you; I think.

Amazingly, the water pump

Still works, pulling water from, the in-ground sink.

We tore your cabin down,

It was not for today’s world.

I hope you don’t mind,

But it was ready to be hurled.

Like the doorknob I found

On the hill to the right.

There’s nothing left to call this a home

Except for what’s left of your light.

Draft, © Carol Labuzzetta, 2023

In the winter of 2019, my husband and I bought this cabin on 14 acres of land. Since then, we’ve demolished the cabin (it was not a local landmark or of historical significance) and put a driveway in that goes up the hill to a ridge top remnant prairie.

Last month, when we were cleaning out the debris from the rock that borders the driveway to the right of the cabin, facing the road, I found an old cast iron door knob. That found object gave rise to the poem you just read.

Today is Poetry Friday. Our host for this week’s round up is Tricia at The Miss Rumphius Effect. Thank you for hosting, Tricia.

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16 responses to “Poetry Friday: Debris (A Found Object Poem)”

  1. jama Avatar
    jama

    I love that you wrote a poem about the old cabin and what you found there. Fascinating to try to imagine past inhabitants and what their lives were like. And the water pump still works?

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    1. theapplesinmyorchard Avatar
      theapplesinmyorchard

      Yes, the water pump works…I am not sure it’s still considered potable water, however. Good for the gardens and plants if we ever choose to build there.

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  2. Laura Purdie Salas Avatar
    Laura Purdie Salas

    That’s fascinating, Carol! A bit bittersweet, a bit practical, and a lot of weaving past into present. Thank you.

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    1. theapplesinmyorchard Avatar
      theapplesinmyorchard

      Thanks for your comments, Laura.

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  3. Tabatha Avatar
    Tabatha

    You’ve made me curious about the story of the people who lived there. Carol. It’s a story we can only imagine. Thanks for bringing us along.

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    1. theapplesinmyorchard Avatar
      theapplesinmyorchard

      Tabatha, Actually, I know who the person was who lived there alone until the 1990s – an elderly woman. Her descents still live on the property adjacent to ours. It would be interesting to know more.

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  4. lindabaie Avatar
    lindabaie

    Love it, Carol We had a cabin in the mountains for years, now sold to another, but there was a foundation near where we found some ‘debris’, old food cans, a key my daughter kept. I love that you’ve set some words for this place, probably special long ago to someone. Your wondering of the life led there is poignant.

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    1. theapplesinmyorchard Avatar
      theapplesinmyorchard

      Thank you, Linda. Finding the door knob was definitely the inspiration for the poem. I had not thought about writing until then.

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  5. Alan j Wright Avatar
    Alan j Wright

    Carol your post and your poem evoke past memories and tangible remnants of that former time. Your poem reminds me of a Lucinda Williams song ‘Side Of The Road’ -…
    “And I wondered about the people who live there.
    And I wondered if they were happy and content.
    Were there children and a man and a wife?
    Did she love him and take her hair down at night?’
    Your poem honours that past life, even though the cabin has now gone.

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    1. theapplesinmyorchard Avatar
      theapplesinmyorchard

      Thank you, Alan, for your comments. I felt almost compelled to wonder and commit my musings to words when I found the doorknob – we didn’t keep anything in the cabin when we tore it down except for an old wood stove we gave to someone. Given the song you referred me to, I know I’m not the only one that wonders about the past. Thanks.

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  6. Patricia Franz Avatar
    Patricia Franz

    I love the imaginings of the lived life within the cabin. And what a perfect “find” — a doorknob, the portal to what once was. Thank you!

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  7. heidimordhorst Avatar
    heidimordhorst

    I like how you imagined and conversed with the woman of the house. I’m sad to think of the cabin gone. The doorknob and the pump, the “remnant prairie” are all such interesting details!

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  8. Jone R MacCulloch Avatar
    Jone R MacCulloch

    I really love these images and wonderings about what life was like in the cabin. The title “Debris” is fitting.

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  9. janice scully Avatar
    janice scully

    We once knocked down an old cabin and it had a water pump just like in your photo. It always is interesting what happens to objects over time, how the new becomes old. Entropy, I guess, which is another word that interests me. Love your poem.

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  10. Karen Edmisten Avatar
    Karen Edmisten

    So many questions and wonderings about the occupants of old … if the cabin walls could talk! Love the sense of curiosity and kinship here, Carol.

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    A Gift of Words ⋆ Patricia J. Franz

    […] Summer Poetry Swap package I received this week.  She included her beautiful found-object poem “Debris” which I loved when she first shared it with us back in June. The old cabin, while gone, still […]

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