Poetry Friday: Rain, Rain, Rain

A pause in the rain let us take a walk down the road. © Carol Labuzzetta, 2025.

Hello, Poetry Friends!

While much of the country has been captured by extreme heat, we have been getting an overabundance of rain. In the last forty-eight hours, our neighbor’s rain gauge has recorded 6.5 inches.

I’m ready for some sun!

My week has been busy. Monday, I was on the road for much of the day. In the morning, we returned our granddog, Stewart, to his rightful owner, our youngest son, Ben, and his fiancée, Julia. This was a three-hour round trip. Then, after being home for lunch, I took off to Wausau to volunteer at some beloved gardens. This was another two-hour round trip.

Tuesday, I worked on the piles in our garage, from the storage unit we are trying to empty. I worked on a book chapter that afternoon. I’ve been procrastinating on this project, and I’ll be sorry if I don’t get moving on it.

Wednesday is our breakfast out day. Our middle son, Matt, who is 25, joined us since he’s at the cabin now working on some projects of his own.

Thursday, it poured all day. I wanted to get some writing done, but didn’t. I worked on some blog writing for Medium and poetry editing, but not chapter writing. I thought it was Friday all day. So, today feels like a bonus!

Wild Blue Lupine, © Carol Labuzzetta, 2025.

I’ve been taking photos in the yard when there are a few minutes of dry weather. I found a monarch caterpillar on some milkweed in our yard, and then I found another. Both tiny larvae, and after so much rain, I had to go check on them. I found one but not the other.

The rain has made things verdant and green. My gardens all look great, and I haven’t had to water.

Last night, I painted a watercolor of a dragonfly. It’ll be part of the summer swap.

This morning I worked on a picture book draft. This is my first foray into exploring this type of writing. We’ll see.

I wrote a poem and submitted it to The Toy, but again received a rejection. Their theme was hobbies. Our youngest son made some very complex pieces of origami between the 3rd and 6th grades. It was his hobby I chose to write about. I haven’t had much luck with submissions. I’ll keep trying. It’s all you can do, right?!

Origami by Ben. © Carol Labuzzetta.
Origami

Taking a piece of paper
I fold it this way and that
Following the directions
To make sure each fold lays flat

Matching the edges
Creasing with care
Creating peaks and valleys
Changing the shape with flair

After lots of concentration
And hours of practice every day
Soon, I’ll have a paper masterpiece
To share and put on display

Origami is my hobby
An ancient Japanese art,
I hope I’ve done it justice
For I cannot take it apart

© Carol Labuzzetta, 2025

This week’s round up is being held by Tanita S. Davis at her blog, fiction instead of lies. Thanks for hosting, Tanita! Please visit her blog for more poetry goodness.

7 responses to “Poetry Friday: Rain, Rain, Rain”

  1. theapplesinmyorchard Avatar
    theapplesinmyorchard

    Although I left a link on Tanita’s blog, I am blocked (or deleted) from commenting and cannot find an email to contact her about this. If any of you reading my post today can help send her this message – or Tanita, you see this yourself, know that I cannot access your comment area to leave one today. I hope you can fix it. Thank you for hosting.

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  2. margaretsmn Avatar
    margaretsmn

    I am also blocked from Tanita’s site. I don’t understand. Seems like you have been enjoying much activity in your life, from delivering granddogs to work in a garden. I hope the monarchs make it. Do you ever try to raise them in a net? I’ve had recent success, but I try to wait until they’re good and fat.
    I liked to teach modular origami to my students. Your poem described the process well, even with some rhyme mixed in. Keep submitting. I think it keeps us humble to keep submitting.

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  3. Linda Mitchell Avatar
    Linda Mitchell

    Woah! Look at that origami! That’s cool. I know the feeling of not seeing writing accepted. Keep at it. I keep telling myself not to quit my day job. Ha! It’s rained like crazy here in the last day or so. I like the green but it feels like too much. The second stanza of your poem is my favorite…the making part. I can just imagine a kid (or me) totally engrossed with that.

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  4. Michelle Kogan Art, Illustration, & Writing Avatar
    Michelle Kogan Art, Illustration, & Writing

    Fun ending to your poem Carol, and beautiful origami piece too! Lovely lupine, we saw a whole field of wild Lupine when we were visiting Spring Green, they are truly magical, thanks!

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  5. patriciafranz Avatar
    patriciafranz

    With my OLW, unfolding, I’ve been playing with origami this year, too. And it has been a wonderful source of small poems. Your young son’s origami was far more complex than any I’ve tried!

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  6. maryleehahn Avatar
    maryleehahn

    Lucky you that you have monarchs! Don’t take them for granted!! Last summer I was fostering 15 black swallowtail caterpillars by now, but this summer, there’s been exactly one. One. He/she is in chrysalis right now. I hope s/he will find a mate upon emerging!

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  7. Karen Edmisten Avatar
    Karen Edmisten

    So much rain! We had about five inches last week and it also felt like too much at once (and made me flash back to last year’s flooding, blergh.)

    What a fun origami piece your son made, and such a fun poem about it, too. Yes, keep submitting! Write, submit, repeat. 🙂

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