A while ago, before the vaccines for COVID-19 were approved, I was playing with some alliteration. This is a work in progress, but in absence of other words coming to me today, I will share it for Poetry Friday.
I think our world, particularly the United States, is stretched thin right now. It seems everything is crumbling. With each passing day, a new concern or problem arises. They are not problems for one or a few but problems for us all, as the world and our country as we knew it will probably never be the same.
In the last few days, I’ve tried to focus on things I know will calm my soul and quiet my mind. Mainly, this has been trips into nature or my photography focused on bright, cheerful flowers and gardens. Bright spots have included rime frost, a visit from a Bald Eagle, and an opossum begging a grilled dinner!
Words can be playful too. When I considered what to share, the “P” alliteration poem came to mind. I hope the beginnings of which are enjoyed and not taken too seriously.
Pandemic passing
Plum pancakes served with pancetta on the porch
Plentily pleased pre-pandemic palates
A panacea portends without particulars preeminently
While in Parma plates of pizza filled the piazza
Pennies or pence or pounds for products produced
Pockets previously packed now pauperish
No pork, plums, pancakes, or parishioners for the poor
Just priests in a pinch and a pandemic’s passing
As this is a work in progress, any suggestions for additional “P” words I can work into the alliteration would be highly appreciated and considered! Thank you!
Today is Poetry Friday! The round up host this week is Sylvia Vardell of Poetry for Children. Please click on the link to see a plethora of poetry books for children soon to be published in 2021. Thank you Sylvia for compiling this list and for hosting today’s round up!
So pleased to land at a blog new to me, Carol.
Perhaps you will like to know that Panacea, a pastoral coast town on U.S. Highway 98 in the Panhandle of Florida, is pretty close to our town where my family & I like to read poetry, grow lemons & take walks.
I’m glad you feel alliterative & good cheer in collecting a phalnax of P words ~ it’s been a precious moment of Peace here at your blog, to play today.
Many appreciations!
Jan/Bookseedstudio
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Thanks, Jan! I am pleased to know that Panacea is also a pastoral place! I am going to try and incorporate some of the suggestions I received into expanding the poem!
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You are sneaky, Carol, sharing about Sylvia’s list: “plethora of poetry”. It fits your poem well & I found each line made an image, some lovely to imagine, others stark about our times. Well done! What I might share: It’s pretty perfect that some states are now painted purple! Thanks for the thoughts!
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Ha! Thank you! I really did not realize I had done that with Sylvia’s list! I guess I had “P” on the mind! I like your suggestions and will be trying to incorporate what I’ve received into expanding the poem!
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I love this, Carol – your poetry pleases plentifully:) WHat to suggest? maybe something around the word ‘problems’ – problems proliferate?? Or, more optimistically – petty problems pass.
Also, maybe something about pets offering comfort – pets profer patient company. Or something.
A clever idea. Thanks for sharing your progress.
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Sally, thanks so much for all your suggestions! I will be trying to incorporate some of them into expanding the poem!
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Carol, thank you for joining the Poetry Friday gathering with your beautiful pictures and words! I love your playful “p” party + poem, too! 😉
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Thank you, Sylvia!
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I love your photos. And the blue sky that complements their crisp colours.
Just for fun I will take pleasure in passing this p-plate back to you;
Particular poetry pals pondering, penning and pruning palatable passages.
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Thank you! I appreciate your suggestions! I will try to incorporate some of them into expanding the poem! I like your P words!
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I love those photos–they offer some brightness in a dark week. And here are some more p-fun:
Presidents
polish pragmatic policies,
promise plentiful projects,
provide powerful programs,
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Kay, thanks for stopping by and for your compliments and well as suggestions! I am going to try and incorporate some of them into the poem!
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Gorgeous photos! They tell so many stories. I like the “P” word, probably.
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Thanks, Linda! I am going to gather all the suggestions I go and try to incorporate them into expanding the poem.
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Wonderful pics Carol and such a powerful bittersweet poem. I sure like those plum pancakes, might have to look for a recipe…
Here’s a “P” line for you, shows you where my thoughts are–
Presidents parade of pummeling poppycock
disintegrates his power into pocket-size pieces
Thanks!
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Thank you Michelle! I am going to gather the responses I got and try to expand on the poem. I like your suggestions!
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