On two consecutive nights this week, I sat on our dock at dusk and watched the loons gather. It was an interesting time, one full of serenity and calmness, as well as appreciation for this bird I’ve come to enjoy. Both nights, seemingly, held a routine. Three loons were gathered in the middle of our small Northwoods Wisconsin lake. Two take off, leaving one by themself. On the first night, the two loons circled right overhead making a perimeter sweep of the shoreline. It thrilled and shocked me both. I kept watch, waiting for them to return. The lone loon gracefully glided towards the southern end of the lake. I think they were just riding the current but might have been slowly swimming. During this time all was quiet. I’ve really come to appreciate the quietness of the lake during the week. Eventually, there were loon calls from the southern end, although I couldn’t see them. Soon, all three loons were back together again, at the far end of the lake. And, this sequence of events is repeated on the second night. Throughout all of this, on both nights, there were spectacular sunsets.
At the end of June, just after our move to the lake, I started a poem about dusk. I finished it and offer it today as my Poetry Friday post. With half the world (it seems) on fire, my husband and I are appreciating the cooler days and refreshing nights in our forested cabin on this small freshwater lake. It doesn’t entirely stop me from worrying about the world or climate change but tempers the anxiety I feel for us globally. This doesn’t mean we are not concerned enough to do our part, it just means that we can think clearly during this uncertain time of global warming. We all have to act NOW if we are to save ourselves from our selfish human consumptive ways. Think sustainably and act sustainably.
Northwoods Dusk
Dusk at the lake Leaves rustling Birds, homeward bound, bustling Quietness returns for goodness sake A coolness to the air Invites a turtle to lay her eggs As our dog begs To see her as she sits there Snakes safe in their dark crevasse The day’s heat gone And saved for the morns wet lawn To scare this gardener, a mere lass As the sun sinks low A morning dove coos Evening though the night ensues, It is summer, don’t you know!? The days are long And nights are short, As the kids build a fort, We listen to natures song Soon the fire stops crackling’ bright And we’re tucked in our cozy beds Loons make one last yodel overhead Now all is quiet, dusk turns to night. © Draft, Carol Labuzzetta, 2022







Loons at Dusk: A Haiku
waiting for the loons
patiently so patiently
crash, water landing
© Carol Labuzzetta, 2022
Today is Poetry Friday. The incomparable Mary Lee Hahn is our host today at Another Year of Reading. Please check out her website for links to more poetry from participants and her own poetry about some yummy summer veggies! Thanks for hosting, Mary Lee.
Carol, I feel like I’m getting to know the loons here today. My only experience with them is on the back of a Canadian loony dollar. Your dusk poem is so peaceful. I like the use of the word yodel here: “Loons make one last yodel overhead” — I just went to listen to them. I know it stays light late this time of year, doesn’t it? So there probably are some summer days where you are tucked into bed before dusk turns to night!
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Thanks, Denise. I am a recent fan of loons . Despite that, I find them very inspiring for poetry! I’m glad you liked the poem!
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You have perfectly conveyed the peacefulness of your Wisconsin lake. Thank you for sharing your beautiful words and pictures.
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Thank you so much, Mary Lee! And, thanks again for hosting!
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ahhhhhh. I feel like I’ve had a visit to the north country. Thank you for the poeming of quiet, for goodness sakes. Love that.
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Thanks, so much, Linda! I’m glad you enjoy the poem!
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Carol, thank you for the reflection on loons and water. I fell in love with loons early in my marriage on a visit to my husband’s sister in northern Minnesota. The photographs are a beautiful complement to your poem’s line “as the sun sinks low”.
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Thank you Patricia! I have a great respect and awe for nature that serves as inspiration for my writing!
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