What kind of feedback do you offer your students on their writing? Are you red pen crazy? Do you mark up the paragraph, page, or essay with slashes, carots, and circles every where there is an error? Do you do this with another color pen – trying to conceal your zeal for marking the page?…
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Holiday Haiku
Snow, Softly Falling White Blankets Sleeping Green Grass Wondrous Winter World Twinkling Lights Shine Bouncing Off Dark Wet Pavement Leads Us Into Night Wrapping, Baking, Fun Music Festively Playing Christmastime is Here Friends Remember Us Told Through Open Greeting Cards Peace, Love, and Kindness
Not writer’s block but…..
This morning I spent an hour working on a post I have had sitting my drafts folder for a couple of weeks. It is a post on untold stories. Already quite lengthy, I was trying to tweak it a bit. Some parts were not as clear as I wanted them, so I was working on…
Writing Haiku
Working together on our haiku unit in the spring is one of my favorite writer’s circle activities. By the time students are in third grade, they are at least familiar with, if not adept, at counting the number of syllables present in words. Accuracy in counting syllabic parts of words is an essential part of…
Popularity Contest?? Not here.
Blogging, like a lot of things in life, is like a popularity contest. I have never been a “popular” person or run with the “in-crowd”, so why should I expect differently from my blog? I am beginning to accept this. I write because it satisfies me, I have been told I am good at it,…
Student Writers Make Me Think
Over the summer I heard a few times from one of my former students from the Third Grade Writer’s Circle group I have led as a volunteer for the last six years. She was a particularly precocious writer and has continued to send me bits and pieces of her writing since she was in my…
A Smattering of Haiku
Sultry September Heat unlike those known before Keeping Monarchs Here Sourness from Sourpuss Not much more can one expect Cringing, Pucker-Up Healthy scars healing Under yellow, tender flesh One Day at a Time Nurses nursing nurses In the O-R, on the floor Care for All and More …
This is Not a Funny Blog and I Am Not Sorry: A Reflection on Writing Daily
Having written/posted a whopping 178 blog posts since February 23rd 2017, the date I started this blog, I thought I would take a minute and reflect on my writing. I sat back and tried to take an objective look at my writing and how it appears so far. These are my thoughts: Amusing? Yes, at…
Tuesday’s Slice of Life Are Slices of Life
There is much I could write about today for my slice of life post and the supportive writing community of two writing teachers blog. There is the personal angle, really foremost in my mind that today is my 30th wedding anniversary! It really is a milestone of two lives entwined with a shared past, content…
Fragrance or Odor? All in the Nose of the Beholder.
Being blessed with an acute sense of smell is both a blessing and a curse. The tiniest of scent in the air can be picked up by my olfactory system. Scents, like music, can also transport me in time back to my first love – a clean fresh smell of deodorant, or being in college,…








